Suby & Sins House

15 Nov 2005 990 views
 
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Alternative verision of image posted on 15 November 2006

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Alternative verision of image posted on 15 November 2006

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  • Laurie
  • United States
  • 15 Nov 2006, 13:07
The tones are much improved and the branch is gone. Yay! Although the blotchy shadows under her thigh are still there.

I still think her hand being chopped and the way her chin and neck aren't defined (high fashion models have long, thin necks) is a bit of a negative. Like I mentioned perhaps more tilt, perhaps a little less rotation of her head would have elongated her neck and made it appear thinner. I also noticed the hand on her hip is not gracefully bent. Her hand should be more relaxed, gently curving on her hip (rounded instead of angular) so as not to look so severe, if that makes sense.
  • don
  • United States
  • 15 Nov 2006, 13:13
I brought them up side by side and I must say both seem fine to me. For me, the photographer is the creative person and if he sees that a picture would be appealing in a distinct departure from what most would consider usual, then he should go ahead and process it that way.
  • david
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 15 Nov 2006, 15:06
i for one am glad to see that the poor girl has had that branch removed - must've hurt like hell!!
love this version, buddy... she's beautifuly dangerous!
  • tbyte12
  • United States
  • 15 Nov 2006, 17:45
Much better... looks more natural. You should experiment more with poses so you can take advantage of the different angles (there is something about the left leg that bothers me). As well as you are being creative with the camera you can ask the model to come up with different poses as well... But again, this is easier said than done...
  • chris p
  • Great Britain (UK)
  • 15 Nov 2006, 23:18
That's better smile
  • Martin
  • USA
  • 17 Nov 2006, 18:10
I could not quite figure out why I didn't like really the previous version. This one is much improved smile.

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